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 ^  Maksag Oordar  ^^
 |Jeenor of Tonaran|1513-1541 [[dantrian_calendar|SR]]|
+|Ruler of Mantar|1527-1540 SR|
+|Successor|[[Nilma Oordar]]|
 |Born|end of 15th CSR|
 |Died|1543 SR|
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-**Maksag Oordar** was a warlord, [[tarnarian_military_ranks|Jeenor]] of Tonaran and the de facto leader of much of [[Heran]] in the beginning of the 16th [[dantrian_calendar|CSR]]. He was also the actual forefather of Oordars and grandfather to [[Kren Oordar]].
+**Maksag Oordar** ([[bukk|bukkean]]: Moksog Urdor) was a warlord, [[tarnarian_military_ranks|Jeenor]] of Tonaran, ruler of Mantar and the de facto leader of much of [[Heran]] in the beginning of the 16th [[dantrian_calendar|CSR]]. Referred to as "the Sword of Oordars" by both his friends and his enemies, he was known for his bravery, closeness to his troops and tactical genius, later attributed to Kren's knowledge of the future.
+His youngest son, [[Nilma Oordar]], became the Angry King of Mantar. His eldest son [[katsag oordar|Katsag]] was a second Murdoh at Maird.
+Maksag was also the actual forefather of Oordars and grandfather to [[Kren Oordar]].
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 Comprised of foreigners, mainly migrating to Tonaran from [[Laeooy coast]] in search of opportunities and wealth, the northern regiment was in fierce competition with the southern regiment and frequently faced hostility from the local population, who considered them to be outsiders despite the fact that they were part of the army.
-During the Oordar invasion, this history of discrimination led the northern regiment to change sides and join the Oordar forces, which contributed to the defeat of Tonaran.
+During the Oordar invasion, this history of discrimination led most of the northern regiment to change sides and join the Oordar forces, which contributed to the defeat of Tonaran.
 By the end of the battle Maksag happened to see Rodare Oordar being wounded and thrown off his horse. It is not clear if he knew who Rodare was, but he defended him, standing over him. This act of bravery deeply touched Rodare and he said that they shall be brothers forever.
-Rodare's wound became worse and it became clear that he was nearing death. Rodare decided to make Maksag Jeenor, but Maksag, a simple soldier, was worried that his authority would be questioned, since he was an outsider in Heran, having originally come to Tonaran from Kren, a tiny town in the north. Rodare then said that he will take the name “Kren”, to ensure that no one questions Maksag's authority or origins. Thus, Rodare Oordar became Kren Oordare and Maksag became Maksag Oordar.
+Rodare's wound became worse and it became clear that he was nearing death. Rodare decided to make Maksag Jeenor, but Maksag, a simple soldier, was worried that his authority would be questioned, since he was an outsider in Heran, having originally come to Tonaran from Kren, a tiny town in the north. Rodare then said that he will take the name “Kren”, to ensure that no one questions Maksag's authority or origins. Thus, Rodare Oordar became Kren Oordar and Maksag became Maksag Oordar.
 ===== Jeenor of Tonaran =====
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 Instead of butchering Delavire's army, Maksag offered them a choice to join his army. Many have refused and were killed on the spot, but some agreed. Around 2000 men joined Maksag's forces. Maksag then allowed his army to ransack the city, hoping that this would increase his authority among the troops. Thousands of civilians were enslaved and sent to Ernele, Or and Tonaran.
-He then marched his army on the city of Qep and used the same trick. It worked again, most Qep forces exited the city in order to engage the enemy, but as they were drawn into fighting the lead regiment, the rest of Maksag's troops attacked them from behind, while also entering the city. Qep fell the same day, although this time Maksag limited the amount of ransacking, realizing that Qep is too important to be destroyed. He installed one of his Jeens [[Ulan Moree]] as [[lafit]]. Nevertheless, under Ulan's rule about 20,000 people were sold into slavery in the next few months and Qep was thoroughly looted, throwing its population into poverty and devastating its economy.
+He then marched his army on the city of Qep and used the same trick. It worked again, most Qep forces exited the city in order to engage the enemy, but as they were drawn into fighting the lead regiment, the rest of Maksag's troops attacked them from behind, while also entering the city. Qep fell the same day, although this time Maksag limited the amount of ransacking, realizing that Qep is too important to be destroyed. He installed one of his Jeens [[Ulan Moree]] as [[Murdoh]]. Nevertheless, under Ulan's rule about 20,000 people were sold into slavery in the next few months and Qep was thoroughly looted, throwing its population into poverty and devastating its economy.
 After leaving Qep, Maksag crossed the Quoon West river and approached Quoon river proper. Another major city of Qep, Lora, was situated on the eastern bank of the river. The massive bridge in front of its gates was partially taken apart at the end closer to the city. There was a fortress called East Wall to the north of Lora that guarded another bridge across Quoon, but it turned out that it was situated on a high rocky shore, leaving anyone going through the narrow bridge at a disadvantage.
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 But as all of this was happening, Maksag took advantage of the fact that his army was enormous, and had some 30,000 men journey upstream of Quoon and find a feasible place to cross it. Such a spot was found about 230 km to the south and the regiment made it to the other side. They then approached Lora from the east and forced the eastern gate to be shut. This effectively isolated Lora from the outside world. The siege lasted for 5 months, with most of Maksag's army crossing the river to its eastern bank and approaching Lora from the east. Or's trebuchets were unable to be transported across the river, and so several of them were taken apart, transported over the river and rebuilt. Eastern walls of the city were significantly lower and also did not have the advantage of the height difference that the eastern bank of the river had in respect to its western bank, and trebuchets became a key element in defeating the city.
-Lora fell in January of 1515, almost a year after the beginning of the Qep campaign. This time Maksag allowed his army to loot the city for several days. Most of Lora's population was either enslaved or butchered. When leaving the city, Maksag ordered it burned.
+Lora fell in January of 1515, almost a year after the beginning of the Qep campaign. This time Maksag allowed his army to loot the city for several days. Most of Lora's population was either enslaved or butchered. When leaving the city, Maksag ordered it burned, although he spared several noble households and left his Jeen [[Heemin]] as Murdoh.
 He then lead his victorious army back to Ernele.
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 Maird campaign started in 1518 SR, but was unsuccessful at first, as Maird was able to mount a guerilla counteroffensive, which caused heavy losses and forced Maksag to retreat. In turn, Maksag launched his own guerilla campaign and a shimmering 3-year conflict ensued.
-Eventually, Maird and Tonaran negotiated a peace treaty and, in order to seal it, Maksag married [[Maye Seaoor]] in 1522.
+Eventually, Maird and Tonaran negotiated a peace treaty and, in order to seal it, Maksag married [[Maye Seaoor]] in 1522, and Maksag's eldest son [[Katsag Oordar|Katsag]] became Maird's second Murdoh alongside the ruling Seaoor clan.
+==== Uprising in Or ====
+Since Kren was born in Mantar, his knowledge of western history of Heran was scant. This proved to be disastrous in some cases. For instance, Kren remembered that some time during his rule a disastrous uprising in Or would occur, but he did not know exactly when.
+This foreknowledge made Magsag appoint several Murdohs to Or so that they compete for power and are thus more likely to be loyal to him. At the same time he increased Tonaranian military presence in the city, which made the situation tense. Conflicts between Tonaranian soldiers and citizens of Or, as well as soldiers of Or, became frequent. This gave rise to the independence movement led by [[Drifter Zunooley]], a powerful [[superhero warrior]] and a local celebrity.
+Thus, it is believed that Kren's knowledge of the uprising at Or is what ultimately triggered it.
+The uprising began in 1522, with part of Or's military on the side of the revolt, and all the Murdohs but one betraying Maksag. The ensuing skirmishes led to the retreat of Tonaran forces to Ernele, with moderate losses on both sides.
+Maksag marched on Or from Ernele and found the gates locked. The rebels taunted Maksag, by launching the loyal Murdoh from a trebuchet and attaching a note to his body, which said "The Sword of Oordars is just a stick".
+Maksag began the siege, but Or's defenses were almost entirely immune to Or's famous trebuchets that allowed Maksag to overpower Qep so easily. At the same time, defenders set trebuchets on top of the walls and were able to force Maksag to move back farther from the city. Zunooley, whose ability included creating invisible defensive fields, would reliably protect the walls from attacks, while allowing arrows and projectiles to pass through.
+Maksag attempted to cut Or from the Erna river to prevent the city from receiving supplies, but was unsuccessful in maintaining the blockade. Additionally, he attempted to dig tunnels in order to get inside the city, but discovered that the rebels preempted his tactic by already having a network of tunnels, heavily guarded and also used to supply the city. They were then able to consistently destroy his tunnels and attack his forces by using Or's own tunnels.
+The tunnel network was not a recent development and it showed that Or was never completely transparent with the Oordar's and Maksag was never told the full extent of Or's military capabilities.
+The siege lasted for over a year, with moderate loss on the Orian side, but heavier losses on the side of Maksag. The balance turned in Maksag's favor by the end of 1523, during an unusually cold winter when Zunooley became severely ill. At the same time, Kren suggested they build a wooden platform in front of Or's eastern wall, so that the trebuchets are higher above the ground and can reach over the wall. This allowed Maksag to start several fires in the city, and eventually the siege was broken.
+Maksag severely punished the military, executing over 30 Jeens of Or. He also put all the Murdohs in cages and hung the cages over the gates of the city and allowed them to starve. Or was also put under considerable tax, although it was lifted soon thereafter.
 ==== Mantar campaign ====
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 The campaign ended in 1527, but Mantar's resistance was fully defeated only by 1533.
-==== Uprising in Or ====
-Since Kren was born in Mantar, his knowledge of western history of Heran was scant. This proved to be disastrous in some cases. For instance, Kren remembered that some time during his rule a disastrous uprising in Or would occur, but he did not know exactly when.
-This foreknowledge made Magsag appoint several lafits to Or so that they compete for power and are thus more likely to be loyal to him. At the same time he increased Tonaranian military presence in the city, which made the situation tense. Conflicts between Tonaranian soldiers and citizens of Or, as well as soldiers of Or, became frequent. This gave rise to the independence movement led by [[Drifter Zunoola]], a powerful [[superhero warrior]] and a local celebrity.
-Thus, it is believed that Kren's knowledge of the uprising at Or is what ultimately triggered it.
-The uprising began in
 ===== As de-facto ruler of Heran =====
-Maksag had a good grasp on how to create influence, and although Oordars never created an actual empire in Heran, Maksag created a network of lafits that effectively functioned as provinces of a government, albeit under looser control.
+Maksag had a good grasp on how to create influence, and although Oordars never created an actual empire in Heran, Maksag created a network of Murdohs that effectively functioned as provinces of a government, albeit under looser control.
 While Qep's major cities were the city of Qep and Lora, Maksag kept a close eye on the region and after returning to Ernele continued a remote campaign, in particular defeating the North Wall, another important fortress which did not yield after Maksag's campaign.
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 His handling of Maird was thus markedly different, which ended up yielding to Oordar's peacefully, while his Mantar campaign was informed by Kren's knowledge of the future.
+Known as the Sword of Oordars, Maksag was both feared and respected and had many Murdohs, warlords and whole courts demonstrate their exceptional loyalty to him. Toyen effectively began to do Maksag's bidding and distanced itself from Damilo, instead aligning with Mantar. Maksag's influence was so broad that it began to spill over the borders of Heran, increasing Mantar's authority in central Tarnaria as well. Maksag's rule also visibly reduced Qep's reputation to being a vassal state to Mantar.
+Maksag helped bring slavery to the forefront of Heran economies for centuries to come and made Mantar the center of slave trade and the most brutal slavery laws in the region, in contrast with its milder attitude towards slavery and the prohibition of slave trade.
+While incredibly generous to the northerners as Jeenor, Maksag made the lives of foreigners in Mantar worse. This was later enhanced by his son's draconian religious laws.
 ===== Personality =====
-In spite of his accomplishments and unquestioned authority, Maksag was known to be painfully insecure. He would frequently worry that Tonaranians would think he is just some foreigner from the north. As a result, he broke off all links to his family. His old mother was said to have visited him in Tonaran, but he refused to see her.
+Maksag was brave and never afraid to lead his troops, so much so that during the Mantar campaign his Jeens begged him to stay behind the lines.
+In spite of his accomplishments and unquestioned authority, Maksag was known to be painfully insecure. He would frequently worry that people would think he is just some foreigner from the north. As a result, he broke off all links to his family. His old mother was said to have visited him in Tonaran, but he refused to see her.
+As a ruler he was deliberate, but his chronic insecurity made him capable of acting without mercy, which he would then invariably regret. This was further fueled by Kren's advice, which made Maksag feel vulnerable, as he knew that a lot of his accomplishments are only possible because of Kren's foreknowledge.
+His relationship with Kren was stressful to Maksag: Kren seemed to have sincerely loved him, but to Maksag Kren was a mentor who elevated him from a poor foreigner to the ruler of Heran and he felt intimidated in his presence. Therefore, once Maksag conquered Mantar, he happily settled there, far from Kren.
-As a ruler he was deliberate, but his chronic insecurity made him capable of acting without mercy, which he would then invariably regret.
+[[Davi the Heranian]] writes that "Maksag was wary of Kren's affection and was scared to death by his mentor's foreknowledge. He always believed that Kren knows something about Maksag's own future that he isn't telling him. He sometimes told Katsag that Kren's friendship is the result of him pitying Maksag, that something terrible is bound to happen to the Sword of Oordars."

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